After peer review, we decided to change a few things. First, we added the logo of the cookies to the top of the page, above our company name in the signature font. We also simplified the contact information at the bottom of the page, and added our hours of operation as well as our last call for deliveries. Repetition between paragraphs was cut in order to make the news release flow in a more cohesive manner, and clunky wording was edited to be more clear. For example, in the third paragraph, the sentence “Hours of operation for MMF are…” was changed to “Hours of operation for the Midnight Munchie Fixers are…” in order to cut down on confusion between MMF as shorthand for Midnight Munchie Fixers and MWF as shorthand for Monday-Wednesday-Friday. Ultimately, our rough draft was well made at first, and the edits were mainly cosmetic or to enhance understanding.