Frankly, I think my draft went better than my final. I re-filmed my final 4 times and just could not get it right. I felt like my timing was off, I was stuttering over my words, I kept pausing, and I simply could not get it right. The biggest critique of my draft was a lack of eye contact, and while I did manage to fix that in the final version, it felt like everything else just was off. I am not a fan of my final draft, but after multiple retakes, eventually I had to accept the fact that it was just not my day to film a speech.