While I’m revising the cover letter, I definitely want to focus on wording and how sentences are constructed. One of the biggest things we talked about was how to make sentences flow and how to lead into paragraphs without sounding clunky or too abrupt. There wasn’t much feedback on my cover letter as it was a pretty basic application, but there were a few spots where wording could be tightened up. I think ultimately I won’t be making too many changes, but I definitely will be looking over the wording and figuring out how to tighten up sentences.